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Tuesday, November 12, 2019

The River



WALT to do a poem the town from James K Baxter
The River was usual enough there was eels, weed, mud a bank and tadpoles that went to a pond somewhere else My friends and I did what boys do - swimming, eeling, bombing, getting stuck and Doing mud Fights
doing Nothing important!

1 comment:

  1. wow jake very interesting vocab keep the hard work and you will be a superstar. but maybe you cand drop your poem down a line and make it easyer to read and under stand.
    Oscar

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