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Thursday, September 13, 2018

ZIPLINE



20.10.17 ZIPLINE!





I went on my flying fox and when I went down and down and then I forgot my brakes but I always bring an axe in case of an emergency I woll gast cut the line when I need to get off When I was near school I cut the line All friends wall I broke my leg and I had to go to hospital and it really stung so I had to go into hospital for 3 years When I got home I had to go to school alone again and then I I did the same thing over and over and over again, and then I never got to learn at school and See my friends again When I stop I was at work Never got to see my friends for 12 years It was real stink So when i you stop breaking stuff I cut and destroyed the my zip line and just went to work just walking down the steep, steep, steep, steep Hill.





By Jake Matthews
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1 comment:

  1. VenessaSeptember 17, 2018 at 4:41 PM

    Oh dear! Luckily this isn't a true story. I think I would much rather zipline down to school, than walk down the steep, steep hill. Have you thought about adding in some punctuation to make it easier for your readers to read?

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